"A Symphony of Dreams"

He saw the world

as no one else

A symphony

of dreams.

Colors woven

in his life

A tapestry

serene.

There was wonder

in his eyes

childlike

you could say.

And you could hear

the angels cry

When at night

he'd pray.

He saw the world

as no one else

A world of things

unseen.

For he was just

a simple man

who dreamed

a simple dream.

Thank you and may God bless...Night.2012

Reviews

[jdr / Jennifer]

brilliant writing- love the way this piece flows- great writing.

"He saw the world as no one else
A world of things unseen
For he was just a simple
who dreamed a simple dream"

[Night]

...Hi jenn, thank you my friend...:)

[Carolann Dowsett]

So lovely and yes I see myself in it. To see worlds unseen with eyes that are focused on heaven. I love it.

[Night]

...good.:)

[J. J. Nightingale]

A MAN WITH A DREAM .. A MAN WHO SEES WHAT COULD BE .. AND PRAYS FOR ANSWERS.

NICE .. JASMINE

[J. J. Nightingale]

:) .... x

[Acron 4]

I think you could do so much more with this poem, it has started wonderfully.....Thank you for sharing

[Night]

...thank you sir.