ONE WITH THE OTHER

LOOK INSIDE

WITHIN DARKNESS, LIGHT CAN REDEEM.

WITHIN FORGIVING, PEACE MAY BE KEEN.

WITHIN HATE, LOVE CAN BREATHE CLEAN.

INSIDE ALL OF US, HOPE CAN BE SEEN.

Reviews

[Amata Luna]

"A man of a few words" I always hear them say. Truly, you are one of them. Great because though you use such minimal words to make a poem, you made not just one point but a whole lot of realization within each man. Nice piece.

[Bare trees]

A nice positive message and all true. I like the little alliteration bits, they flow so nicely. well done.

[GiveMeLove]

words of wisdom :]
beautiful poem!
you must be an old soul