Our Sunset Dreams

Our Sunset Dreams

 

In the sea of you and me

There is a gulf in the straights.

A span of the world lain out,

For us to intake.

 

As water moves to and fro,

Crashing over stones beside the sea.

It gives place to

Our sunset dreams.

 

Though troubles arise

And life leaps against us,

Let our love sail through

Winds strong… and be victorious.

 

Like the beauty in the orange hue

Which lays the sun to sleep in peace,

May we too, set in motion

Our sunset dreams.

 

In peaceful lull,

Let us surrender our love.

As the water finds the tide,

So too, are we enough.

 

Diving faith first,

In the sea of you and me.

Let us take on the world with

Our sunset dreams.

 

Melinda McQueen Rodgers

November 1, 2021

Reviews

[ABDUL WAHAB]

Wonderful poem Meinda. Liked these lines
Though troubles arise
And life leaps against us
Let our love sail through
Winds strong… and be victorious.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for reading and leaving your much appreciated review.

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem dear Melinda.
"Diving faith first,
In the sea of you and me.
Let us take on the world with
Our sunset dreams."
I agree with the above lines. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry my dear friend.
Coyote

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for reading and leaving your much appreciated review.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Melinda.

[Pryde Foltz]

So NYCE ...
Diving faith first,

In the sea of you and me.

Let us take on the world with

Our sunset dreams.

It felt sublime reading this:) Perfect piece of romantic poetry with a whole lot of expansion.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thanks for reading. Nice to meet you.