A Sea of Love

A Sea of Love

 

How deep my love for you,

A depth beyond my reach.

A sea for you to ever delve into.

 

Everything you do

Hypnotizes the woman in me.

How deep my love for you.

 

Like a sunny day anew,

Your love shines my happy.

A sea for you to ever delve into.

 

Unto my soul, a truth

By which my love believes.

How deep my love for you.

 

A tantalizing perfume,

Love forever sweet.

A sea for you to ever delve into.

 

Let not your kisses be few,

Lest my heart be in need.

How deep my love for you,

A sea for you to ever delve into.

 

Melinda McQueen Rodgers

September 16, 2021

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved the complete poem.
"Let not your kisses be few,
Lest my heart be in need.
How deep my love for you,
A sea for you to ever delve into"
I loved the above lines and thank you dear Melinda for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your visit and for your review.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Melinda.

[wordman]

as deep as an ocean as high as a mountain,if it`s god`s love your reffering to there is no counting

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for reading. I appreciate you.

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[barleygirl]

This line is great: "Your love shines my happy."
This feels like a villanelle with the repeating lines, which you do well without the repetition feeling onerous. Frankly, I love the way you've written every single line, so graceful, so sincere, but I just started getting a little tired of the repetition toward the end. That's just me (((HUGS)))

[Melinda McQueen]

Yes it is a villanelle which is all about repetition. Thank you for reading. I appreciate you.