Light in the Window

Light in the Window

 

Lingering softly,

Beckoning peace.

A warmth in its glow,

A beauty bestowed.

 

Beaming on the inside,

Reaching the outside.

Calling from its home,

Light in the window.

 

A trusting form,

A shelter from harm.

Igniting a spark,

Delivering from the dark.

 

It shines upon all,

And answers the call.

Love ever flows,

Light in the window.

 

So open the curtains of your heart,

You just may impart

The Light which saves…

The Light God so gave.

 

The heart to care,

The hands to share.

The eyes to show

The Light in the window.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Soft, gentle and wonderful use of words.
"The heart to care,
The hands to share.
The eyes to show
The Light in the window."
I liked the above lines. Safe place for love and friendship. Thank you Melinda for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Melinda.

[iamshadowine]

"The heart to care,
The hands to share.
The eyes to show
The Light in the window."

damn good! I love your poem
keep writing :D

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your words.

[Woolliza]

I enjoyed the religious metaphor. This is probably just a personal preference, but it feels a bit wordy. I would pare it down to only the essential elements.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your words.

[B.J]

That is absolutely wonderful

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for reading. God bless.

[B.J]

you are welcome

[Chris]

Well said and thoughtfully spoken.

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Valentine]

I like this idea for a write. One just feels safer walking into the house when there is a light in the window. Valentine

[Melinda McQueen]

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[GalaxyGhost]

This is a fantastic imagery in a poem and has a tone of peace or calm to it. I love it!

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Another Relic]

A wonderful comparison. This is really good.

[Melinda McQueen]

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[wordman]

lovely sentiment melinda,great message

[Melinda McQueen]

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