Sing Your Life to Me

Sing Your Life To Me

 

Share with me your thoughts

Until the light is brought.

For light shines brightest

When giving your best.

 

Tell me of your dreams

And all you wish to be.

Perhaps you will set them free,

Sing your life to me.

 

Let me be your sounding-board

As your heart I explore.

The melody of you

Becoming my truth.

 

Like a rose unfolds,

Your life I want to know.

Petal by petal, let it be,

Sing your life to me.

 

You enrich my heart

Just by being a part.

Opening the door,

You I adore.

 

Share with me your smile
And I shall never tire…

My heart will be happy

As long as you sing your life to me.

Reviews

[samparks,sam]

exict sound too much keep it continue I like

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for reading and leaving your review.

[guy drori]

Sounds like someone is inlove...
I liked the way your stanzas are built and your occasional rhymings.
There is something very beautiful about the love you described here but also something quite troubling that I found. The person who speaks in this poem sounds awfully dependent due to his strong love which is close to being an obsession. And dependence...when too much, can bring great devastation to one's life.
I had a great read and thanks for sharing this :)

[Melinda McQueen]

When you love you gotta give your all. With that said, I know God is my true love. I'm only dependent upon Him. Thank you for reading and leaving your review.

[Coyote Poetry]

I love your poetry for love dear Melinda.
"Share with me your smile
And I shall never tire…
My heart will be happy
As long as you sing your life to me."
The above line. Perfect place to know. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for reading and leaving your review.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Melinda.

[??????]

This is a master piece full of beauty:) Thank you for your wonderful words:)

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for reading and leaving your review.

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Your very welcome:)

[wordman]

reminds me of king solomon,he was a poet and song writer

[Melinda McQueen]

Kool. Yes he was!