This is so contemplative Melinda, and I am glad to have come across this piece by you. The ladybug is a metaphor and is your addressed to whom you're expressing your ruminations and bewilderments about yourself and this world. Very well expressed.
Best, M.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you for your visit and leaving behind your words. God bless.
Lady Bugs are such gentle and colorful much lile this piece my friend.
Aware and content tbey are. A bit sad but a lovely write,
Very cool Mel, Thanks EG
To me, ladybugs represent contentment; such a beautiful and harmless little critter. When I read the word screen I took it to mean your computer monitor screen. If I am ever in the middle of writing and a ladybug lands on MY screen I'll think of you and this magical write, and hope my poem turns out near as good as this one. Thanks for the read request, I'm happy I got a chance to review this piece. Great job! take care...dan
I enjoyed the poem. Made me remember the ladybug song of youth.
"Ladybug on my screen,
Why you choose to stay here with me
When you could fly anywhere, I do not know;
For I wish I could go."
Ladybugs are free to fly away and we are not. Would be nice to fly to unknown places. Thank you Melinda for sharing the excellent poetry.
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This is such a fun write. This time of year, we start to see ladybugs in our house, which is very old wood frame. They nest underneath off in our attic during the winter. Then, we start to see them in the ceiling, and a fee brave ones glitter down to land on my books or even my hand. I have a stupid fondness for the little bugs and won't allow my husband to have the house sprayed until they are gone. I love conversation with them!
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Yep! They are everywhere! My friends! lol. Thank you for reading. God bless.
Hello, I'm Melinda from Texas. I am a published author. I'm in a chair with Cerebral Palsy and writing is my outlet. I have found deep pleasure in writing poetry. Writing helps me express my emotion.. more..