Love's Triumphant Wave

The sun was just right,

Barely visible, descending for the night.

She could see its faint glow

As the waves washed it into the unknown.

 

Where has life taken her?

She felt the question burn

Like an ember refusing to go out,

Or a weighty overcast cloud.

 

She can’t help but to wonder

The things her heart ponders.

Just where would she be

If there were still “he”?

 

Missing him more with each wave,

The sea roared just the same.

A connection between the two

Evident in all truth.

 

Flooding her… were memories

Of being loved completely.

As a sun bowing down,

His love is still found.

 

Through the crashing waves of the sea

Can she hear inside her very own plea.

Yes, she still feels and tastes

Love’s triumphant wave.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful journey in the words.
"Through the crashing waves of the sea
Can she hear inside her very own plea.
Yes, she still feels and tastes
Love’s triumphant wave. "
The above lines stood out for me. Thank you Melinda for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your review. I appreciate it.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Melinda.

[Perkele.7885]

She is all trusting in these waves to bring her and her "he" closer together. She does not even know where she is at but, Love's Triumphant Wave has found 'His" love!

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Valentine]

Very touching write. For me those days are over, yet his love lingers in my heart. Valentine

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Willard Wells]

Love even after it is gone still lives in our heart for the moments of love. New love will come into a life again and new memories and thoughts will live within you forever. Nicely penned.

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Gee]

Love,love lost and all that follows.Sweet write Melinda

[Melinda McQueen]

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[wordman]

a beautiful love poem melinda, she still feels the wave,great write

[Melinda McQueen]

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