Beyond the Horizon

There’s a place I go

Where the words flow

And all I know

Is what my heart bestows.

 

You, my love, are my heart,

Be not afraid to reach into the dark.

For the light shall shine right where we are.

Beyond the horizon we have a part.

 

Walk beside me

So we’ll both be free.

It’s you I’ll forever need

To wholly be.

 

Take my hand

And say you understand.

As only our love can,

Beyond the horizon is where we land.

 

Hold me tight

With all love’s might.

My heart is light,

As everything feels right.

 

There’s a place I go

Where the love flows

And you I know,

Beyond the horizon, you and I belong.

Reviews

[Samaira]

Beyond the horizon we belong. We believe that and walk into the unknown so sure of love. It's beautiful. And scary at the same time.

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Indra Neil]

Beautiful imagery and wonderful rhyme flow! Well done!

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Indra Neil]

u r welcome!

[Debashish Bhattacharya]

Beautifully flowing words....

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Patrick]

I always enjoy it when poems have those short, strong commands - 'take my hand' , 'hold me tight'
Really enjoyed this

[Melinda McQueen]

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[jacob erin-cilberto]

almost like this life is not where we belong together...it is in the next---something haunting about this one...

[Melinda McQueen]

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[sinNsincerity]

Such a breathtaking horizon and one I dream of. This is so beautiful and that is sincere!
I love it with all my heart!

[Melinda McQueen]

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[AaronFreitas]

Beautiful write... always inspiring Melinda :)

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Valentine]

Aww, beautiful sentiments. Have you tried showing him the poems you write about him? Valentine

[Melinda McQueen]

Yes, he loves them. :)

[dan]

Melinda, "Beyond the horizon..." is such a beautiful phrase, lending an a whimsical air to the subject of love. To build a poem around that spark ignites the whole piece within a bigger framework, lending it extra warmth. Very nicely done, young lady!! take care...dan

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Perkele.7885]

Are you going to share this place with your friends, this place that you know that lies beyond the horizon?
I would like to go just because of the words that flow, and I just might find some future poems there!

[Melinda McQueen]

I hope so! Thank you for your review.