Hold Me in Your Heart

A day dream

To be felt, though unseen.
A wish of the soul
To be known.

 

Tell me your secrets

And I shall never forget.

For you are my start,

Hold me in your heart.

 

Keep me safe

In every breath you take.

For if you ceased to be,

You would take love from me.

 

Look inside,

And love for you, will you find.

In your life I want to be apart,

Hold me in your heart.

 

Let me know

All the beauty you bestow.

Baby, dance with me a timeless dance

While we have the chance.

 

Through time and space,

Let us take our love away.

As two souls ignite a spark,

Hold me in your heart.

Reviews

[Gee]

Neat write Melinda,touching,sweet,romantic,etc,etc

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and kind words in the poem.
"Through time and space,
Let us take our love away.
As two souls ignite a spark,
Hold me in your heart."
The lines above. Perfect for the gift of love. Thank you Melinda for sharing your excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Melinda.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a very touching write...

j.

[Melinda McQueen]

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[sinNsincerity]

I always love hearing your soul speak Melinda.
Such a pleasure and honor as always.

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Confuser]

Melinda; You write from the heart and it's so sweet. Whoever he is, where he may be, he would be so lucky to read this lovely poem. I enjoyed it very much. To be loved is to be Held within someone's heart, and I love the title. I love it all but this is my favorite stanza:
Tell me your secrets
And I shall never forget.
For you are my start,
Hold me in your heart.
As two souls ignite a spark, Hold me in your heart. Beautiful!! Thank you so much...Dale

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Confuser]

You're welcome Melinda....d

[Samaira]

'Dance with me a timeless dance'. It's the most beautiful line. Nicely written.

[Melinda McQueen]

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[dan]

A poem that crossed my computer screen like a mellow summer evening breeze, love in all of its gentle splendor, a gift for all of your readers. I, as one, thank you for sharing it with me. take care...dan

[Melinda McQueen]

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[Valentine]

The title of this write explains it all. Nice one. Valentine

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[Perkele.7885]

another great write but, with grammatical errors!
4th stanza line 2 needs a comma after the first you or the second you
3 a part

Last stanza line 3 as two souls ignite a spark

[Melinda McQueen]

Thanks for your help!!!!!!!! :)

[HummingMaster]

Very Beautiful and expressing words

[Melinda McQueen]

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