Pearl Girl

With painted eyes,

She has her world in her sights.

Twirling in a solo dance,

She awaits her chance.

 

Dreaming to become all she feels inside,

She captures the light

As she spins and twirls,

For she’s a pearl girl.

 

About her slender neck

A string of pearls rest.

A prayer lies upon each,

Ever within her reach.

 

Though her dream cup

Has yet to be filled, she doesn’t give up.

Her fingers touch each, giving her faith a whirl,

For she’s a pearl girl.

 

Having been under tense pressure,

This pearl will soon be made pure.

For she knows

That dreams makes her faith grow.

 

So, she smiles her smile in divine graces,

Knowing that her rough places

Are being made smooth in dramatic swirls,

For she’s a pearl girl.

Reviews

[Valentine]

Dreams can make faith grow, pursuing dreams is what many of us spend our lives doing. Valentine

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for reading and for your much appreciated review.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful tale my friend.
"So, she smiles her smile in divine graces,
Knowing that her rough places
Are being made smooth in dramatic swirls,
For she’s a pearl girl. "
You left good place and vision for me. I like the girl with the pearl. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for reaching and leaving your review. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Melinda.

[Samaira]

Hope and faith are very strong. Also, acceptance and knowing that all our bad moments get better with time. her rough place are being made smooth in dramatic swirls. Great job.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for reading.

[jeannemarie coulter]

well penned and a good read...thank you

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for reading.

[sinNsincerity]

And she deserves to be a pearl girl! =D

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for stopping by my little bitty spot in this world to read my heart.

[sinNsincerity]

It is always such a pleasure and honor to read your heart.

[Robert]

Your faith is so evident in each piece you write Melinda. I can sense the peace you have with the faith you carry with you. A lovely written piece you have let us read.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for stopping by my little bitty spot in this world to read my heart.

[wordman]

i guess we test and use our faith in many ways,this is a great write melinda

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for stopping by my little bitty spot in this world to read my heart.

[wordman]

it was my pleasure

[dan]

Downplaying obstacles to her dream the character chooses to trust her faith and forge on. Everyone knows how to give up, not many know the euphoria of realizing what they have already been given. A tender and hopeful piece, very well done Melinda. take care...dan

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for stopping by my little bitty spot in this world to read my heart.

[Perkele.7885]

This was a different approach to saying a prayer to the father as she dances, spins and twirls.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for stopping by my little bitty spot in this world to read my heart.

[Willard Wells]

Very nice flow and nice content. Thanks for sharing.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for stopping by my little bitty spot in this world to read my heart.