This is beautifully written and conveys a reverence and peaceful spirit that so obviously guides you. I am sure that He enjoys it immensely. take care...dan
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks so much for reading and leaving your much appreciated review. God bless.
Beautiful and gentle words.
"A Love to replace my pain.
A Heart to listen,
A Heart to watch me rise again…
In Thy gentle grace."
Thank you Melinda for sharing the hopeful and amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thanks so much for reading and leaving your much appreciated review. God bless.
Melinda I found the first stanza to be not as good as the rest - maybe the use of two 'ush' type words did it..?
The rest are beautiful and each one of the others could be a lovely stand alone micro-prayer/poem.
Keep writing my friend.
:)
And i pray lord my soul you`ll keep..and keep my mind from wandering away
and keep me in my faith till your return one day...keep me still keep me humble
overlook me if i mumble..my faith is high,and i`m here on my knees..keep me humble if you please..
Hello, I'm Melinda from Texas. I am a published author. I'm in a chair with Cerebral Palsy and writing is my outlet. I have found deep pleasure in writing poetry. Writing helps me express my emotion.. more..