No One Knows...

How I feel.

How I deal.

How I release.

How I am at ease.

How I dream

When I want to scream.

How I hear my inner voice

Through the noise.

How I keep going.

How I keep sowing.

How I know sadness

But not forget I am blessed.

How I stay strong.

How I hear my song.

Who am I to say no one knows?

For all God’s people know He is on His Throne.

Reviews

[KingJoseph]

You'd sum up all that is man, but made it clear that God knows best. Truly a powerful poem and as always, the rhymes are like cherries! Amazing as always :)

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your review. I appreciate it.

[Confuser]

Melinda: Just a very beautiful thought provoking poem full of emotion and passion. No one knows what we are going through. It made me think, about how God wants us to show kindness to all people. We never know what's going on in their life: Be kind. But it's much more than that. How I....heighted the poem, builder it emphasizing the need for understanding. Leaving off the How, going through the perfected rhyme scheme, I see and feel the power in your words: How I hear my inner voice (mine is so frazelled at times) It like a plea: Hear me Everybody: If you do, tell me how? How do you deal with this pain, this heartbreak: And that's what people that read will feel: Humanity, compassion, empathy; Does anyone else understand. It heartwrenching, full of honesty. I wish I could go this deep. It's inspiring and uplifting; visually, I close my eyes and pain comes through reverberates, shattering all allusions of the beautiful life, with anxiety. Thank you again. I love it, and will not forget it; EVER.
Through the noise.
How I keep going.
How I keep sowing.
How I know sadness

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your review. I appreciate it.

[Confuser]

Melinda: I still didn't write a review that will do your poem justice, it's thundering, and I have NO excuse other than I was rushed and nervous. Like you write so eloquently, life's not a bowl of cherries. I learned, next time, put on my reading list. So sorry. But kind of you to thank me; I still wish to read again. Dale

[Melinda McQueen]

I really loved your review. It was thoughtful and heartfelt. Thank you again.

[Confuser]

Melinda, my mother had surgery the day I reviewed your poem, and Melinda is her middle name! She's fine, but I was nervous and worried. If ya get to know me & I hope you will; please know you can always talk with me; especially when I wrote something like that; the thing is, I'm writing in my review, compassion; and didn't even show it....I know you forgive me, but know too, I learned!! Felt terrible.....Dale

[B]

Very clever one there
We all share so much
so we all know
like we all know of god up above

Love it

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your review. I appreciate it.

[Jamestown]

This piece is marvelous!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your review. I appreciate it.

[guy drori]

Nice, and very strong words you used there. Good rhyming too when needed. I liked the ending very much :)

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your review. I appreciate it.

[Girl With A Pen]

Wow, very strong words here. The rhyme scheme flows off the tongue nicely. Thank you for sharing :)

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your review. I appreciate it.

[Perkele.7885]

Always praising in wonderment, always in awe! the way we all should be. Even though we will always fall short of the Glory of God.

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your review. I appreciate it.