The Faith Flight

Flying high,

The invisible current swift.

Ever so light,

It continues to lift.

 

Yes, tribulations come,

Rearing their ugly heads.

Their destruction done

From east to west.

 

Even so, the flight soars
The heights of its dreams.

Fighting all the more

While it kicks and screams.

 

Pushing forward with force,

It leaves its feet,

Knowing with certainty that its source

Derives from faith’s belief.

 

Pulling its weight,

It has the power to climb

Outside the realm all because of faith.

The limit… beyond the sky.

 

It never lets you down,

But escorts you to aim high.

So, with hearts reverently bowed,

Hop aboard the faith flight.

Reviews

[Shane Mohamed]

It sounded like the character was trying to defy gravity. Faith is a powerful thing, especially when it makes sense. Tribulations can be devastating, but it's the only way our faiths are put to the test. I sense a religious notion to this. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

[Melinda McQueen]

Exactly! Thanks for your review.

[Chris]

a softly positive feel and flow...welcome to WC

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your review.

[Chris]

I meant what I said...I don't do platitudes or thoughtless words - just so ya know. Read you Carpenter as well - sometimes we CAN say more with less - even per line.

[wordman]

a constant struggle against evil,the devils demons
a great write

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your review.

[wordman]

my pleasure

[GreenEyedPoet]

i enjoyed reading this piece, esp loved the first stanza. Great poem hun. :)

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your review.

[Jamestown]

I loved reading this piece, very well written with much truth attached!
I just posted a piece called Love's Flight you might enjoy:) Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Melinda McQueen]

Thank you for your review. I'm about to read Love's Flight!