Starships
A Poem by
several thousand
S hipping those two
T ogether they are
A mazing and romantic
R oars and sighs
S imply happy
H olding in
I ncredible patience
P erhaps someday
S ailing away
© 2018 several thousand
Reviews
Such a mesmerizing imagination! Really loved this acrostic poem! Thanks for sharing!
Mk.t.g
Posted 1 Year Ago
You can really read between the lines. I love it. Says a lot more than there is written. :)
But I'm biased, it's my dream to sail away, or fly away, or something similar with someone someone. ;)
Posted 5 Years Ago
You can really read between the lines. I love it. Says a lot more than there is written. :)
But I'm biased, it's my dream to sail away, or fly away, or something similar with someone someone. ;)
Sorta kinda reminds me of an online "relationship"... perhaps someday realized.
I love your word economy. Sometimes that can be the hardest thing to achieve when writing good poetry.
And this was definitely good poetry.
Posted 6 Years Ago
Sorta kinda reminds me of an online "relationship"... perhaps someday realized.
I love your word economy. Sometimes that can be the hardest thing to achieve when writing good poetry.
And this was definitely good poetry.
So much imaginary just in short! Love 'em!
And you're profile is great...Proper sundae😀!!
Posted 6 Years Ago
So much imaginary just in short! Love 'em!
And you're profile is great...Proper sundae😀!!
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Added on June 17, 2018
Last Updated on June 17, 2018
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