Muse

A ramble

I don't have a muse

Only luck every now and again

Presenting itself in the form of a "friend"

How a-musing

 

Is this insecurity

Doesn't see himself in my eyes

We've eskimo kissed a thousand times

Inside out security

 

Lo and Behold

Half-love dont you know

Half of love is simply "lo"

Behold it's low

 

Inspired but not "about"

Maybe he never thinks of me

All that I think and all that I seeeeeee

But roundabout

 

Disappointed?

Even goal-less sloths get an itch

Oh luck thou art a faithless b***h

Appointing dis...

 

Ha, I know tis not of me

Just as this is not of thee

 

Author's Note

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thanks for reading

Reviews

[apennylate]

Oh wow, I just love the word "muse", and I will admit it is somewhat my weakness. Both the ideal behind it, and the transparent need for an "inspiration", is quite a set foundation for some writers. Absolutely clever play on words, and double meanings. Knife edge rhymes, succinct breath, clean and sharp line structure. The small, subtle combos of words both display, and highlight more than than just the inherent story. It certainly made me think, hah. Seeeeee me leave a nice comment on your clever ruse. Fantastic job.

[Shannon]

Some clever word play. I suspect it has a meaning beyond what I can glean. But I enjoy lines like:
Lo and Behold
Half-love dont you know
Half of love is simply "lo"
Behold it's low

[several thousand]

Thanks S.Mi
It is a bit of a odd one.
I'll probably wonder what it's all about myself in a year or two.
Glad you enjoyed. =]

[Kelsey Ann]

A very interesting write.

[several thousand]

Thanks Kelsey Ann
A bit weird I admit
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