Time...

Time is something we must hold dear

It's something one cannot see

Nor even hear

Something precious and valuable

Not something to be careless about

So I warn you to never waste time

But to hold your loved ones close

And your enemies even closer

For you cannot predict or suppose

What is going to happen

For only God knows

The time and place 

Yet keeps track of no mistakes

But instead chooses to forgive us

No matter how long it takes

For us to find him

Even if the chances are very slim

Where there's a will

There's always a way

With time you'll never comprehend

What could happen in even a second

For only the holder of time understands

Why things must stay

And why things must go

Never try to control time

Or abuse its powers

For if you are not watching closely

And counting the hours

A dearly beloved person 

Could be taken away

Thus the reason we should always say

What we need to say

Before comes the day

When we are all taken away

Those who remain

Will be soaked in tears

But those who leave

Will be rid of fears

For they will be 

In the house of God

The sanctified place

In which the angels trod

When someone does wrong

They will sob

When someone is saved

They shall cry out in delight

For that person has found

A true light worth the time

That stretches all bounds

And never fails to astound

For he has spent his days

And succeeded in many ways

Cherishing every moment 

They find

True happiness

For they have

Made use of their precious time....

Reviews

[Lord of mad men]

I like you views on the concept of time. I love this very much. It is well worded and I liked how it flows together so well. This is nicely done. It is well written and I enjoyed the read greatly. Yours truely a mad lord

[Tori Jones]

Thanks, Mad Lord.....