Rejected

I'm cast out.

From my little world

From where once I blacked out

In my sphere of things no one cares

What I am thinking about

Love is overrated

And I'm unprivileged

As love is like a privilege

Hence most of us abuse it,

And I do not deserve it

For I have been fallacious

To be forgiven and forgotten

I'd like to be loved

But I have always been shoved

By the scars that burn my flesh

With exhausted memories that bleed afresh

You simply care

About nothing but yourself

And like a blunt knife,

I waited for you on the shelf.

You say things that burn a hole in me

You tell me to be

Someone I am not meant to be

You make me see things

No one should ever have to see

Why can't you be more caring

And just love me the way I am

Instead you just sit there staring

Pointing out my mistakes,

Taking me back to my past

And blaming me for how it all began.

Rejected and alone

I look for a home

I knocked on a door

That locked me to the floor.

Then you my father, took me in again.

Only to beat me and put me in pain.

For I deserve to be worthless

In this chained cage I feel hopeless

Having taken my last strike

I'm dying from being alone

My whole life disintegrating,

Into a substantial hole

Drifting into the unfathomed depths

From which cold darkness creeps.

Love is something that I'd love to keep

Then I'd have something to breathe 

And to live...

Author's Note

This is a poem me and my friend, unfathomd, wrote together...

Reviews

[Lord of mad men]

Okay with is very very deep and meaningful. You do put up a good case about love being undeserving
Well that's is true but as is so much other stuff but is does not matter all acts are selfish it's just life. Like me writing this review is me being selfish. Because I like this piece and want to voice that. So love no one deserves but we get it anyways so you should just accept you can't change you desires yo love and be loved. Why because deep down maybe very deep down you want to be loved because the way if feels. Thus it is your own desires that make you want it. But no matter what love finds all sometimes you don't see it till its to late or you hide from it but it still finds you. Most humans are one of two kinds of selfish the purely self care that means they only do things that benefit them then the selfish for ones self and may help others. Which is you help others to help your self everything you do is some how for your self. So yeah you are right but also wrong same with everything. This was a great peice. Yours truely a mad Lord

[Sapientiam]

Love is only overrated if you make it that way. Love can be pure, sacred. It can heal, it can also break. Though, everyone deserves love. No one this planet is undeserving of it, no matter how evil the person is. If we can accept our downfalls, we can learn to get back up and find the light in us. Everyone has a light, even if dim. It's all a matter of discovery. ^ ^