Do You Love Me

Do You Love Me

A Poem by Tori Jones

I felt you looking at me
Wanting to say something
But you got scared
And turned away
Why won't you talk to me
I want to discuss things
Between you and I
Won't you talk
And stop being so shy
I think of you
All the time
But you won't talk to me 
And I can't understand why
Don't you love me
Or is that a lie
Because I love you
And I need to know
Do you love me
If so why
How could you love me
How can it be
For someone like you
To love someone like me...

© 2016 Tori Jones


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Well penned!
The flow is terrific,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Tori Jones

8 Years Ago

You're welcome, and thx for the review...
First I was very shy and I still am kind of am. But the best why to know how someone feels. Is just tell them then brace for the impact. And I know how you feel being u sire how someone else feels is a very hard thing to handle. You need to know but you don't now how to find out. And you fear you will lose that person if they don't feel the same way. Love can't really be explained fully. Trust me I try everyday. Love just happens you really dimt choice to love someone it just happens. Yours truely a mad lord

Posted 8 Years Ago


Tori Jones

8 Years Ago

Thank you for such encouraging words...I really appreciate each and every one of your views...
Very relatable write here, I can sense some longing in this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very relatable poem. Nice work Tori, I hope everything's works out with whoever this is about :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tori Jones

8 Years Ago

Thank you...I hope things work out as well...

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Tori Jones
Tori Jones

Mansfield, OH



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