Flaws...

We see and hear things

That one cannot explain

We hide it and secret it

But still feel the pain

And regret forevermore

For we ourselves 

Are afraid of what may happen

If we let our secret slip

And that secret we hid for so long

Becomes known

And others are shown

What we did

And refuse to forgive

The secrets we kept 

For deep within

We can't stand the thought

Of being known

For our past

Instead of what may be in store

For we have hid

A secret within

One worth showing 

But not actually knowing

The truth behind it all

For we all have our flaws....

Reviews

[Saloni]

More people need to be like this!
Amazing work.
Specially the part
"The secret within
One worth showing"
Awesome!

[Tori Jones]

Thanks, you are very kind to have reviewed my poem...Stay safe, be blessed...

[Adam Adams]

of course, my sweetness... we're all have flaws. humans may NOT... b-born with flaws, but they certainly have flaws, and such stupid-idiotic & so faceless flaws oft. disturb us all ov'rnights.. for no reason. i sorta like the diversion of your work -- flaws & past. past & flaws. quite interesting, my love.

well, just for the matter of fact, i kinda very much admire such give lines:

"We can't stand the thought
Of being known
For our past"

ah.. sounds so familiar!
you just got me, lady! one of my fav. writes.. for sure!

[Tori Jones]

Awww, that's so sweet of you to say... Thank you so much for the review, it means so much knowing people actually read my poems... They're not the best, but I really pour my heart into my poems...
Stay safe, be blessed...

[Adam Adams]

well senorita, i don't think if they are NOT SO best. i guess, they're REAL... aren't they, my love? of course, they are .. xoxo & i oft. admire reading such realness of hearts' that not just let readers get hypnotized by majestic words, but also take 'em to their own world once they been gone through whether happily or sadly... with or without such "flawless scars". nicely written. i must take some more shots or glasses of your poetry before i shut the day of "writing". xoxo

[Tori Jones]

You're very kind, I'm happy we're friends....

[Adam Adams]

well, at least glad to carry some of the pearls of smiles to your face, my love. be cool. be hot. and also... let depression suck outta yer toes. xoxo everything's gonna be okay with time. have faith. have grace. have gratitude but also ... live it with damn pure attitude. xoxo

[Tori Jones]

Thanks for the advice...

[Adam Adams]

anytime, sugar.

[Karmee]

A secret within
One worth showing
But not actually knowing
The truth behind it all
For we all have our flaws....

Love this part, I can sense your feelings in this write.
Very well expressed

[Tori Jones]

Thank you!