My box...
A Poem by Tori Jones
I'm trapped In a box With no way out Someone help me I don't want to be Alone in my box anymore Please get me out I want to talk And have fun I want to go outside And lay in the sun But life is so hard And dull And I don't want to fall Any longer For I am in the dark And need to find the light So I can escape the night And be out in the sun That shines so bright....
© 2016 Tori Jones
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very deep.. as always.
well, living life the way we wish to is really not that simple, but letting oneself come outta comfort zone, we may breach the contract of depression with mind at all, & can live better, dramatically. your poetry has much depth here. it's showing the glimpse of today's world that how most of people're being sunk into the mania of depression. nicely penned!
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Oh, I have tried to come out of my comfort zone it just never works...
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8 Years Ago
yeah, ev'n that's why earlier, i would say, IT'S NOT THAT SIMPLE. nobody can easily get outta their .. read moreyeah, ev'n that's why earlier, i would say, IT'S NOT THAT SIMPLE. nobody can easily get outta their comfort zone just in a moment or in a few blinks. it really takes much time, may be, a week, a month or years ... at all. you just have to find the purpose of your life, which means, you have to find for what you are living or surviving the next day and in a hope of what. once you're so cleared with your thoughts, there'll something magical happen in your heart that you once felt since you been THAT PRIME to be felt and ready to make another port of mistakes. so before doin' anything, just figure out, what you gotta do. if you gotta have sex, then go out & have sex, but not with a wrong guy who has many faces undisguised. be careful at this. xoxo if you wanna live, then .. grab the book and read just a page, & get yourself some coffee, and smile it away. if you wanna dance, just hit the music, shake off your butts, & set the floor on fire, babay. and if you wanna be happy, then .. just say, you're already happy... there's just an obstruction of mind that keeping you away. and you have to breakthrough it first before shaking your butts off. next time, when you try coming outta your comfort zone, just try one more time, & imagine... for what you want to, long to, need to and have to get outta those stereotypes... of life. get your mind clear, sweetie.
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Added on September 21, 2016
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