I Need To Know...

If I told you what I've done

Would you forgive me

And move on

Or would you hate me

And be gone

I need to know how you feel

Am I important to you

Or am I just a tool you use

Am I a light to you

Or a sea of darkness

I need to know

Won't you tell me

So I can know for sure

That I am not alone

And that I can trust you 

No matter what

I need to know if you'll love me

Enough to never leave me

That you will help me 

Even in my weakest hours

Please tell me

I need to know...

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

i believe, your depression's come from "love" or someone's love. it's shown or very well reflected off the offbeats of your poetry. i sorta like the lines:

"Am I important to you
Or am I just a tool you use..."

ah, so muchness of suchlike thoughts're shown now-a-days in this world. sometimes, he uses her for a night... so sometimes, she uses him for some time at all.. such a game of love people living through. only a few minutes ecstasy, i guess, people want that oft. cost 'em for lasting trouble of heartaches. i like the pain of your sad-poetry. very realistic. intellectual .. and so purified. brilliantly but so sadly written!

[Tori Jones]

I wrote this poem about a guy I know....

[Adam Adams]

the other guy than that 64 yr. old man??

[Tori Jones]

Yes, this guy is a LOT younger...

[Adam Adams]

cool. you sound like a real mami. are you a bimbo? xoxo

[Tori Jones]

No, I'm not a bimbo....

[Adam Adams]

great. then you are really a shy gal whose infatuation brings her down to knees. well, i would say then.. may your infatuation end up with satisfaction.

[Tori Jones]

That would be a blessing....

[Adam Adams]

certainly, of course, it would be, my love. have at it. nail it down.

[Karmee]

Enjoyed the pondering thoughts, well written and expressed

[Ange Faith]

Clean-cut lines of truth. The words flow easily over my mind. I like this.

[Tori Jones]

Thank you for the review!

[Ange Faith]

My pleasure.