Sins...

Why is the world full of sin

We do so much wrong

Why do we let it win

Us over until we've gone

Too far to take it back

Or to even hide 

What we've done

We know we sin

But why

Why is it done

Why can't it be

Something else

Someing beautiful

But instead we choose

To be hateful

And sinful

And I am ashamed to say

I have sinned terribly

I admit I have been there

And done that

I wish I could take it back

But I can't 

If I said I could

That would be a lie

For I have sinned

But I am asking 

For forgiveness

And a second chance

To start over

And not do the things I have done

When you're a sinner

You never feel like a winner

But rather a loser

All because of what you've done...

Reviews

[Nico Marie]

great poem. I could really feel your pain

[William Liston]

There's certainly a meaningful message in this piece ... it's sad when people do wrong (or sin) whenever they know that their actions aren't right. The wisdom expressed in the first five lines was especially poignant; sometimes we sin so much that there seems like there is nothing that can fix it. This seemed like a personal write, and I thank you for sharing it.

- William Liston

[Edward]

Some times depending on the sin it is not always bad. I find myself at those crossroads every day with the people I interact with.

[Karmee]

strong read here, i can feel the emotions come through
very well written

[Esther]

Wow this hit me hard. The questions about why we do the things we do really relates to me. Keep up the good work Tori, thanks for sharing this. Pretty much my exact feelings tonight all together in a poem

[Tori Jones]

Thank you....