Rise

I was made to rise

So why am I falling

I feel so empty and broken

Why can’t you fix me

For I am calling

Out to you

Why do you ignore me so

When I need you the most

I’m feeling so lonely

Please don’t leave me

I need help to be happy

For I am lost…

I am hurt

But I can’t find healing

This world keeps on stealing

My joy and happiness

And replacing it with sadness

I’m depressed

And I want to rise

To the top

So I can claim my prize

True happiness

For the rest of my life…

Reviews

[Esther]

I love this poem, it's very deep and it really connects to my past experiences

[Tori Jones]

Thank you. It relates with both present and past for me, I have been rejected and torn apart by everyone...I want to get up and move on, but I am in too much pain to do so. I am happy you liked my poem, thank you for the review

[Karmee]

was made to rise
So why am I falling
I feel so empty and broken
Why can’t you fix me
For I am calling
Out to you
Why do you ignore me so
When I need you the most
I’m feeling so lonely
Please don’t leave me

I SO MUCH LIKE THIS PART.....
So full of direct emotion. I know this feeling rather well too.
Keep writing always.

[Tori Jones]

Thank you, you are very kind...