Being Alone

Being alone is hard and sad

You feel like nothing compared to others

If you weren't alive everyone would be glad

And you think

Am I really that bad

That I deserve to be alone

Being alone is painful

It makes you depressed and weak

Fears hidden behind your fake smile 

People think you're happy

But really you're just hiding the pain

From being left alone in the rain

Being alone results in pain...

Reviews

[Sapientiam]

"Being alone results in pain". You know, I used to hate solitude because it only reminded me that the people I've lost will never come back. Now, I sort of relish in it. Although, I do understand these emotions. No one's deserves to suffer alone, that's for sure. But, this pain is only temporary. How you choose to overcome this depression determines how your future will lay out. What may seem bleak now could possibly be wonderful later on. I should know. So, don't succumb to this.

Still, this was beautiful! Also, your icon reminds me of someone... You don't happen to know someone called ILovePoetry?

[Tori Jones]

Thank you!...and what a coincident! ILovePoetry is another name of mine..on Duolingo...

[Sapientiam]

Ah, I see. I'm MasterZsword, if you remember me. And, you're welcome!

[Tori Jones]

Really?! I didn't know you were a member on here...That's great! I'm glad you found me

[Tori Jones]

I'm going out, I will talk to you later...

[Sapientiam]

Goodbye! Wonderful job, again!

[Tori Jones]

Thank you!

[Karmee]

such an emotional read, very well written and & expressed.
Pain of any sort stinks.

[Tori Jones]

yes, thx for the review