I Have...

I haven't a place in this world

I have no one to trust

I have a need to hide

I have a want to trust

I have a want to love

And to be loved for in return

I have a need to glove

My feelings and my hurt

So no one will every know

How much I feel like dirt...

Reviews

[Chris]

"glove" ?

Being "burned" makes one leary of relationships - pain DOES hurt but so does emptiness and silence. Walls don't share bad or good - moments, days, lifetimes.

[Tori Jones]

Yes, I know it is not fun...But maybe I don't deserve to be happy...

[ManasaC]

This is quite emotional. It is okay to feel this way. I feel this way too. But you are forgetting the one person who will trust you, love you and help you no matter what. It is You. We all get lost, we feel alone but you gotta wake up that person within you. When you start empowering yourself with strong thoughts to find yourself you can help people who feel this way. I am sorry you feel lost and hopeless and I won't say to look at the bright side, because it won't matter what I say, you have to make it up. You will find your Sunshine. Just hold you. You are never alone.
Be brave. God bless you.

[Tori Jones]

Thank you, I appreciate the review.....

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Sometimes we can feel. like this world is not made for us. We feel lonely and without love. but all can change . one day we will be at arms of love and true friends. poem is like great calling about help. i wish your all dreams come true very soon. and indeed it s great poem.

[Tori Jones]

Thx for such kind words, but I doubt I will ever be happy...I have been rejected my whole life, I have lost hope. I am a lost cause and a waste of time. I am broken, bruised and quite frankly unfixable. People have a reason to reject me, and I was hurt for thirteen years because of it. All hope is lost, life is pain and pain is lonely :'(

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i am realy sorry. you got so many years at suffering. nobody deserve to experience with pain. nobody have reason reject to somebody. each person on this planet have right to be loved and feel compassion from other person. i am sure you have right to feel all hopes are lost. myself i feel also reject for so many years. i mean no completly . i had few friends . but last 4 years i cannot realy connect to somebody. and i feel it like you . but some kind of miracle. i meet women who realy love me. and still cannot belive it s truth. but is happening. i just wrote this cause maybe one day. you also make meet with someone. and maybe all your wounds will be heal.

[Tori Jones]

I hope so...