Love

I'm standing here

Can't you see?

Can't you hear?

Won't you be?

The one I've been searching, 

And crying for to come.

The one and only I'll every truly love. . .

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

oh boy, the love's such a disastrous THING in the world that's so capable either to heal it up or break it damn down to knees ... so shattered into pieces... so torn apart into every ounce of broken -- memories. i kinda like the pain -- the real ache -- of life that have you generously shown in suchlike given shortlisted words. very well written, my friend!

[Tori Jones]

Thank you, I write what I feel. Most of the time I'm depressed and in pain, then again life isn't meant to be fun but merely liveable...

[Adam Adams]

ah... such stupid -- "depression". well, you know what, what cause depression?? -- nothing nor no-one but we & oneself. and when we start realizing such things or hoola-hoops of life, we'll resolve the unsolve the zig-zack puzzle or this idiotic suduko of life, ideologically. depression's just a consultant of worst-ness that comes within just like happiness arrives within... & once we're done with such "questionings of heart", yes, we're done with depression, perhaps, our wants're THAT high that we're never done with questions nor so okay with depression at all. such a dejavu! hope you feel good again! you always say, stay safe, & blessed. now allow me to be at your service, & say: "stay safe & so blessed, my love" xoxo

[Tori Jones]

Thanks...you too...

[Abhijit Das-The Poet]

Short but nice.Feelings nicely portrayed.

[Tori Jones]

Thank you for reviewing!

[brian]

'Love'
Wrapped in a box,
Of candy and sweet memories
Today, tomorrow, it waits for me
Through the hallowed corridors
On her lonely, barren floor
Love cries: 'Hold me through this storm'..
'I will', my dear,
'Please, have no fear'
I am the one God's sent to you
To hold your soul, as you hold mine too.

[Tori Jones]

That's a very beautiful poem, did you write it?

[brian]

Yes, just now.

[Tori Jones]

You are very talented :)

[brian]

Thank you very much. I appreciate that.

[Tori Jones]

No problem.