Chapter 1 The Meeting

                                                                              Chapter 1

Once upon a time in a high school there is girl sitting in a desk drawing a rose.Her name is Yukina Nata.I was sitting in my desk drawing a rose when all of a sudden someone had fallen on top of my desk.I was going to tell them to get off at first but when I see his face.Our eyes lock together.He brushes my hair back."Hey Daichi...what are you doing?"Yamamoto asked.Realizing what he was doing,we both started to blush.He got up and walked away when his friends started teasing him saying"what was that....are you in love....why her you could have any other girl but you chose her."That one really hurt me and he could see that because he looked back at me."Hey don't say that stuff it really doesn't matter who I choose...okay."I was surprised he took up for me.I usually say something but I was to...shocked.He left and his friends came over to me."Are you gonna say anything....you're lucky that he choose you I mean look at you,you may have similar styles but don't think too into it."Kaito he was the one who I hated.He is always making fun of me I mean it's not like I care though."Will you shut up,"I said."What did you just say to me b***h."This guy must be an idiot."I said to shut up,"I was pissed off and now I am going to show it."You think you can take me on,"Kaito said."Sure I will take you on just know you are going to lose,"I smirked.He was going to throw a punch when I tripped him from underneath."Told ya so,"I smiled and walked to my house.On the walked home I was think about him.How we did have similar styles.What am I thinking I am sure he is messing with me.I mean I'm the quiet girl who likes to draw and listen to music during class and on the roof,who would someone like me....no one."Damn it,I passed my house."When I turn around there he is my Mysterious Prince.

Author's Note

There is cussing.Everything in the sideways style is in her mind.
I will probably put another chapter on tonight.:p peace out

Reviews

[poemgirl]

yeah but its only the first chapter so i didn't put a lot in it but the second chapter has more deatils

[Mar-Mar]

Nice job, The only thing I'd have to say is. Add more detail, what do the people look like? What is their age? Where are they? What time is it?
Little details like that make the whole story seem much more interesting.
And maybe when the people are talking space it like this.
"I said to shut up." I was pissed off and now am going to show it.
"You think you can take me on!?" He said.
"sure! I'll take you on, Just know. You're going to lose." I smirked
Also maybe instead of using "He said" use "He scoffed" Its much more detailed and easier to picture in your mind

[poemgirl]

tell me what you guys think after you read it and i will also put in any request on what happens in future chapters