The Blinded Mind

When someone is controlled and won't hear of the truth. Abuse and the price.... SEPARATION!

The Blinded Mind

From the days I left you been trained

Self thoughts left you were drained

Manipulation gave way to sad feelings

While the abuser left to the reasoning's

You're to young to remember all I done

To care and love now inside you shun

I am the bad guy by my reactions

Yet your blinded by contractions

A world said to be of money made

By the abuser rules a dark shade

I am the bad one evil so you see

The master of bad you so flee

The dead beat one left you alone

Under rule of the abusers throne

In reality I escape the insanity

In search for a better humanity

Where love is one not of one versus two

When the time comes it will be me and you

Until then pray I remain as I am today

Because tomorrow I might be taken away

Robert© - 2014

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like how you used the language in the poem.
"Where love is one not of one versus two
When the time comes it will be me and you
Until then pray I remain as I am today
Because tomorrow I might be taken away"
The poem left me with things to ponder. This is the best kind of poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[PoemRodent]

Thank you Coyote, I try my best to reflect my feeling at the moment sometimes the words sum it up and sometimes I feel they miss. Thanks for the review.

[Shaquana Adams]

You're to young to remember all I done
To care and love now inside you shun

Beautifully written. I enjoyed! ^-^
-QuanaWana

[PoemRodent]

Thank you -QuanaWana

[Honey-Bee]

Lovely poem! Where love is one not of one versus two...Love this line!

[PoemRodent]

Thank you for the review...

[Cory Barrett]

the rope can only be pulled so much, before it severs.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

So true!!... The last stanza is a perfect ending...

A cautionary tale unfolds in such a poetic weaving.

Excellent write!~xoxo~:)

P.S. typo** you're too young*

[PoemRodent]

Yea yea yea on my third beer.... Please forgive me... (Pssssst Thanks) LMFAO!

Rob

[Robbie~xoxo~]

well, that explains! lol ;)

you're welcome. :)

[PoemRodent]

Shhhhhh behave :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

YOU behave! lol

[PoemRodent]

:P Hahahaahaaha I am actually, I act up in other places. Like Facebook :)