The Draw State

Just some thoughts I am passing around...

The Draw State

I pull, I tug and I see more then you will know

Your thoughts and feelings oh how they all show

Your bindings and pain left bare in my mind

Your anger and suffering holding you in a bind

They vibrate deep, the invade my heart and my soul

Bringing me to a state where I want to take control

Begging to release the deepest feeling of a great love

A heaven created gift from our heavenly masters above

The price for this is a heavy toll buried inside of me

Sentenced to a death without any love for all eternity

Use what you will, taking away what desire you need

I am hollow, ugly and alone for my gift and its deed.

Robert© - 2014

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are very good today. So many lines stood out in the poem.
"Your bindings and pain left bare in my mind
Your anger and suffering holding you in a bind"
The above lines and ending lines I liked a lot. I could built a powerful poem from those words. No weakness on the direct and honest words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[PoemRodent]

Thanks again for your review....