Just Don't

Just Don't

A Poem by PoemRodent
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I have no description other then how I feel...

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Just Don't


Don't tell me in cute little pictures it will be alright

Don't comment me saying don't give up the fight

Don't linger watching to see if I finally have died

Don't sit looking down pretending to have cried


Don't talk of words looking forward to a better life

Don't hand me more bullshit of your own bitter strife

Don't pretend you care so you build your own esteem

Don't preach to me about sunny days, field and stream


Don't hold my hand while your picking my pocket

Don't think a moment I don't feel you in my socket

Don't preach your faith saying I should in him believe

Don't tell me I am wrong when no love I can conceive


Just don't feel anything when I am gone...


Robert© - 2014

© 2014 PoemRodent


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I understand this poem. Sometime we must figure out what we need without help. Useless words and naysayers can leave us empty and cold. Powerful and direct poetry. My favorite kind.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PoemRodent

10 Years Ago

Thanks Coyote, just a bit mooded today and trying to write out the feelings. Better then beating a w.. read more
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are right.

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Added on April 30, 2014
Last Updated on April 30, 2014
Tags: Lost, Unloved, Despair, Dark, Pain, Anger, Sadness, Deep, Withering, Death

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PoemRodent
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I am duality at its best. A traveler and a self proclaimed pin cushion, the voodoo doll everyone enjoys to prick. Yet here I am writing on subjects that eat on my heart, mind and soul. Dark one day, h.. more..

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