The Awakening

When someones feelings are buried from pain and of a commitment and all of a sudden gets awakened it can be scary to finally feel ALIVE!

The Awakening

The dead lie silent for so long

Holding dearest a silent song

Darkness falls at every hour

Pain and agony devour

A comfort zone of despair

Numbness unaware

Feel nothing dark delight

Ghost inside bearing fright

Along comes a breeze

A presence of ease

I taste of passion

rippling in fashion

Breaking your mind

out of your bind

Exposing the weakness

Feelings sleepless

Now awake you face

the light of embrace

Your choice to come

or stay in hells kingdom

Robert© - 2014

Reviews

[Shaquana Adams]

An excellent expression of freedom and the choice thereof. Great job!
-QuanaWana

[melissa]

This is amazing poem keep up the great work and keep them coming

[Cory Barrett]

Consistent and relentless expression of the importance of choice. nice job.

[Honey-Bee]

Now awake you face the light of embrace. I love the thought of coming into the light...And--Breaking your mind out of your bind...Also, the poem seems to imply choices you need to make as in standing at cross roads in your life. Thanks for sharing! Lovely poem!

[PoemRodent]

Yes the choices was an implication. I think maybe Heaven or Hell. A life of happiness or living dead.

Thanks for the keen observation and review.

Rob