It Comes From Pain

When reaching out really is an ache...

It Comes From Pain

My words and thoughts lay open wide

I want so badly for you to come inside

I want you to feel my vibrations deep

Leave you wanting more of me to keep

An interest beckoning from my writes

Stirring feelings subjected mind flights

I offer my hurt and my pain I so live

My heart sets to expand and to give

Injecting my past my broken dreams

Creating a piece evolution it seems

Seducing your mind, caring intentions

My words held in your deep retentions

All with a whisper an ear you gave

So I may speak the words you so crave.

Robert© - 2014

Reviews

[Bowers]

"Injecting my past my broken dreams
Creating a piece evolution it seems
Seducing your mind, caring intentions
My words held in your deep retentions
All with a whisper an ear you gave
So I may speak the words you so crave."
What powerful words you've created!
Deep and resonating, a creative piece you've written... I love it, every word, flowed deep and meaningful from the page. Great write!

[PoemRodent]

You just want my guitar.... but thank you.

[Bowers]

;) haha, I like my own, lol!

[Sky]

Loved it..Every single word.Deep and powerful.Well done Rob.Really really well done. :-D

[William Wapi]

Bravo on this one. Nicely written poem.

[PoemRodent]

Thank you for the praise and nice review.

Rob

[Honey-Bee]

Wonderful write! So I may speak the words you so crave. I like this line

[PoemRodent]

Glad you liked it and thank you for the great review....