Make Me Breath Again

Just some thoughts being thrown around...

Make Me Breath Again

Touch me, reach out with your thought

Let me see what love you have brought

A candle, soft music a write I can compare

Grab me by your words, a few lines to spare

Make me feel what you hold in so deep

Make my heart soar and maybe even weep

Let me know where you emotions lie

Send me words of love so I may pry

Make me breath again a love I so hold

Make me soar in depth and write in bold

Send my heart racing devouring each line

Then read my reply and know I am genuine.

Robert© - 2014

Reviews

[David Scott]

I agree with the thought here Rob. We want to read others. To see the clarity of their souls and to hope they can see us as well. After all, the meaning of our communications is only ever what we get as a response, no matter what we indented. Most often we never really even get to know the response of our words. This is one reason I love the WC so much. We get to know the effectiveness of our communications.
Great job Rob!

[Shaquana Adams]

Thought provoking. I really love the impacting ending. Responses ARE important. Great poem! ^-^

-QuanaWana

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Nothing compares to this kind of connection... it's one that most dream of...
some are lucky to have found it...and to have the ability to write about it, is the icing on the cake...

Well penned!

Robbie~xoxo~:)

[PoemRodent]

Thank you for the review... and I have found this sweet spot several times but alas things get lost in translation. ;)

Rob

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I've been there...
It's my pleasure to read your words. :)

[PoemRodent]

Oh I probably will flood WC some more before the end of the night... Stay Tuned.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I'll check it out.. :)

[louisa]

this is really good! well done :)

[PoemRodent]

Thank you for your kind review.

Rob