Spin

Sun
Ray
Photosynthesis
Leaf
Twig
Branch
Tree
Growth
Trunk
Ground
Root
Nutrient--
--Creek
Mineral--
--River
Rock--
--Bay
Ground--
--Ocean
Continent--
Earth
Solar System
Arm
Galaxy
Universe
The Mind

--Priscilla Moore--

The Mind
Neurons
Charging
Pushing
Info
Faster
Hand
Reaching
Fingers
Say
Words
Silence
Gone
Mind
Speaks
Volumes

--Girl Friday (Sarah W.)--

Buring
Blood
Clash
Stone
Emits
Tones
Lingering
Intellectual
Conceptual
Orbiting
Spheres
Consciousness
Defined

--Shane Mohamed--

Heart
Bosom
Essence
Life
Beauty
Warmth
Serendipity

--I am Jacks cancer--

centrifuge
gyral
vorticose
revolving
sustaining
words
waves
particles
crushing
walls
oceans
churning
whirling
turning
orbits
cogs
frames
machines
sentience

Author's Note

Thanks to Priscilla Moore for the idea, add your own stream of thoughts to this piece. Try using only nouns--no sentences or phrases.

Reviews

[Priscilla Sayers]

Like the first word that comes to your mind, and flows with what becomes relevant logic, a stream of thought led by thought... Nicely done and....
The Mind
neurons
charging
pushing
info,
faster
hand
reaching
fingers
say
words
silence
gone
mind
speaks
volumes.....

[Christoph Poe]

Check out the update. :)

[Rita L. Sev]

An interesting "stream of consciousness" piece - I can see your thought progression here.

[Christoph Poe]

Thanks. :)

[MoonlitAngel]

It's very.. Philosophical. I don't have anything more to say then that lol. Um.. After photosynthesis, you have "leave" which should be "leaf"... And I wonder if you can explain it to me.. How does it go from solar system to arm? I get the rest, but that part was confusing.

Great poem though, I liked the use of hyphens in the middle part.

[Christoph Poe]

It's supposed to be leaf. LOL!

A galaxies arm. I don't think their a technical name for it though.

[MoonlitAngel]

Ohh I see. Cool, I like it. It's different; interesting.

[Christoph Poe]

**there's** I'm not that dumb. Lol.

[MoonlitAngel]

Lol its okay... I didnt even notice.