Spin

Sun
Ray
Photosynthesis
Leaf
Twig
Branch
Tree
Growth
Trunk
Ground
Root
Nutrient--
--Creek
Mineral--
--River
Rock--
--Bay
Ground--
--Ocean
Continent--
Earth
Solar System
Arm
Galaxy
Universe
The Mind

--Priscilla Moore--

The Mind
Neurons
Charging
Pushing
Info
Faster
Hand
Reaching
Fingers
Say
Words
Silence
Gone
Mind
Speaks
Volumes

--Girl Friday (Sarah W.)--

Buring
Blood
Clash
Stone
Emits
Tones
Lingering
Intellectual
Conceptual
Orbiting
Spheres
Consciousness
Defined

--Shane Mohamed--

Heart
Bosom
Essence
Life
Beauty
Warmth
Serendipity

--I am Jacks cancer--

centrifuge
gyral
vorticose
revolving
sustaining
words
waves
particles
crushing
walls
oceans
churning
whirling
turning
orbits
cogs
frames
machines
sentience

Author's Note

Thanks to Priscilla Moore for the idea, add your own stream of thoughts to this piece. Try using only nouns--no sentences or phrases.

Reviews

[IWRITE]

centrifuge
gyral
vorticose
revolving
sustaining
words
waves
particles
crushing
walls
oceans
churning
whirling
turning
orbits
cogs
frames
machines
sentience

i know i wasn't invited but i wanted to play, too.

i like this. fun vocabulary exercise. i want to just give a

100
so
y
not
?

[IWRITE]

i didn't follow the rules- i verbed. sorry!

[Christoph Poe]

I forgot to add yours to the poem. Please forgive me. :) I corrected my mistake.

[AnnaLeQuinn]

This was very unique. Haven't stumbled upon anything like it yet on here. Very cool. Lovin it.
Anna

[MoriartyMesa]

Why it took me to this, only the Gods know. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mHv4rpBo7ss

[Christoph Poe]

Okay, I literally LAUGHED OUT LOUD!

I haven't heard that in years, and somehow, in the depths of my messed up mind, I can see how these kind go together??? Weird.

[Melanie Genevieve]

wave
vibrance
energy
particles
joy

[Aethereal]

If we don't use verbs, then the nouns aren't doing anything: Here's mine with verbs whereby I overlap rhyme:

Bred
rose
bed
grows
red
clothes.

[Shane Mohamed]

This is great. A poem consisting of single syllables, yet carrying a large meaning; the appreciation of nature and the human mind. I could add:

Heart
Bosom
Essence
Life
Beauty
Warmth
Serendipity

I hope I've contributed,
Shane Mohamed

[Khaldun Shabazz]

It is a rather peculiar flow of words, which are, compellingly thought-provoking, in the most naked sense of the word, and succinct. I thoroughly enjoyed this.

[Priscilla Sayers]

oops... I didnt
't use just nouns;(

[Christoph Poe]

Haha, one per person. :)

I like the second one better, though? Which one do you want me to use?

[Priscilla Sayers]

Oh.. it makes no difference to me, it was fun to do:)
You pick, your the Artist in this one:)

[Priscilla Sayers]

I Love IT!!!!
Sublime,
understanding,
when,
words...
Play,
scream,
dance,
twirl
painting
canvases
strike
fast
into
depth
vibrant
bold
hues
expressing
expressions
exposed.....
:o),

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Interesting indeed. I did find my mind spinning a little in the reading, but in a good way. I nearly read the entire thing in a single breath, which was quite an interesting feeling.

Buring
blood
clash
stone
emits
tones
lingering
intellectual
conceptual
orbiting
spheres
conciousness
defined

[Christoph Poe]

Just added yours!

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Cool...this is an interesting idea... :)