Enrage.

Self-mutilation

into shapes and forms

I am unable to decipher; 

My mind creates twisted monologues

while my hand stands idly by.

Author's Note

Tell it like it is. Feedback is always appreciated.

Reviews

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Instead of telling you how or why i can relate to it, or, as you said, tell it how it is, I'm going to tell you what I have gotten from this.

you are having trouble telling the difference between what you see and what your mind tells you. Sometimes you feel as if they are not connected at all. Creating twisting monologues shows me that inside yourself, you are finding that things are never as they seem, almost like you are grasping at straws and then suddenly you have constructed outrageous ideas that only make sense to you. The part about your hand "stand[ing] idly by" is illustrating to me that you know what you're doing, but it isn't your body that's harming you; it's the painful depths of your mind.

[Warren L.G De Mills]

So your mind goes off thinking horrible thoughts while you do nothing with your hands. interesting. good job getting this across in so few words, thats definitely something i don't think i can do lol. Good read . Wouldn't change a thing

[livinglifeloud]

damn girl. This is amazing. so much packed into 5 lines.
"into shapes and forms
I am unable to decipher;"
favorite.