"Mind through Love"

Mind can play games like it is love but don't let the thoughts fool you.

Never felt so lifted; for I know the sky is the limit. Mind so imagnative you swear it was an illusion, confused life that's feeling confusion. Relentess thoughts soar ever so swiftly, breaking out so much you become quite itchy. Come to conclusion brain filled with contusion, abuse to one's self your abusing. Lifted higher tha ever you feel you reached your peak, heart so big yet all the love continues to leak. Your thoughts control your emotion, so if you are one looking for love don't continue praying all we need is hope..

Author's Note

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[Samantha ~virginpoet]

Honestly it needs a little work ... try a different structure, it would add to the poem. I do like it I just think it could be better. I hope I dont sound to mean lol and I dont want to offend you Im just trying to be constructive. I would gladly help if asked :) I wish you luck on this site its very helpful and I love it and the people