Uncharted Mysteries

Uncharted Mysteries

A Poem by Michael
"

Love seeks love

"

 

My longing, yea even my prayer; to know your cryptic heart.

For, not knowing brings great travail on a course without a chart.

 

 

Can I know the  mysteries that you hold so deep within?

Or will I wander aimlessly in search of love again?

 

 

                

© 2008 Michael


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Very simple, but as I always use as a leading arguement against something complicated, simplicity is sometimes always the best. Pretty sad, but a really nice poem. Good job!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this one

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so simple, yet so sad. Even though you don't make a big deal out of the imagery or anything, your chart/course metaphor defines the poem and your emotion easily comes across. I feel the longing and the slight loss of confidence at the rebuff, yet there is still hope in the message. I like it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Now, this is straight to the point. I love how you use metaphores of seamanship to express your love.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Michael
Michael

Irving, TX



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The big picture. That's what drives me. I have to see the big picture. And as it's displayed ever so clear, I frantically begin to write what I see. The action, the pathos, the dreams. They're all in .. more..

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