Nice Guys Finish Last

This is sad, but true

Why is it that i am extrmely nice

Yet valued less than a grain of rice

I do my best

But i somehow fail the test

I wish i could forsee my mistakes

And slam onto my brakes

I wish i could be that one

To hit the home run

Take everything i ever desired

And be admired

Why is it that nice guys finish last

And a******s ride first class

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[lavina k.]

Actually i could associate myself with first four lines...
As i m not able to blame Anyone if anyone does wrong to me and i m even not able to tell them that they are hurting me.
So whatever i do for them i'm always valued less.
thats why i loved your poem because i can relate myself with your poem...
Keep writing!!!!

[Fabian Franco]

Haha I love it man.
It's pretty hilarious. :)
And you kept the rhyme going.
Good job. :)

[gracy ann]

I LOVE it. Its short but very emotional. I have a feeling a lot of young men will be able to relate to this.