Hey there, Pretty

blech. Heartbreak is a terrible terrible thing

Hey there, pretty

I saw you today

Smiling, laughing,

Going on your way.

oh god it hurts me

When you smile

It burns my stomach

          -putrid bile

You're just so glowing

Bathed in my pain

It suits you well

Yet it hurts the same.

I fell too hard

It broke my heart

I can't get up,

I'm falling apart.

Tearing at the seams,

Ripping at the hems.

It's amazing how quickly

this pain has stemmed.

My body is shaken

My hands are cracked

And all i can think is

"I want you back"

I rushed in too quick

Like only fools do.

Believed I found more,

Deep inside you.

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

you wrote so well the feelings of heartbreak.
i love the line about how your pain makes the subject glow.
you have a nice way of making the words flow .. it has much soul and i felt the pain ..
nice writing, sad and hurtful subject.
chloe