Reverend Bizarre - Evoking Tragedy.

Reverend Bizarre - Evoking Tragedy.

A Poem by Phillip J Clayton
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Reverence to the unholy.

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Black goat, temple of skin -the sacrfice begins,
flesh press, lead them to their torturing deaths,
mental home for the funeral orchestra,
god of life, god of gloom we pray to you - damned to our doom.

Unholy abused, deities of darkness enter the light,
void of silence and disembowelled, gaged on sadism;
sarcasm smiles at a thousand dead,
the sun falls behind the graves, grim silhouette stand proud;
graves and crosses cast shadows on this face.

Thirst for blood and hunger for death,
sick pope, take no mercy in your ministry,
undead crusade move swiftly - what little time,
kill thier god, torture their men, f**k their women
and slave their children.

Doom sayer speak loudly!
give us morbid, we want tragedy!
amendment day anoint your demond,
I dub thee pain, I dub thee hate, I dub thee sadness, I dub thee tragedy;
sssshhhh speak not thine name, you only emulate.

© 2008 Phillip J Clayton


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thanks for the reviews, i don't know why i didn't reply to you guys before, means a lot.

GTVile would love to have awesome music for my poems lol. Sometimes I write them and i hear music in my head.

Chloe at the time i think it may have been new thanks luv glad you like it. Gary well said words man, you both are on point.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Brutal. I'd make an old school Morbid Angel style thrashy-death metal song out of this. Maybe along the lines of "Summoning Redemption". Good job.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This reads like you are standing there stripped naked covered in the blood of the beast and reciting the words in anti religious fervour. The images are deliberately unholy and I think you show here how much imagination can be shown in the darker side of life - what I mean is, how the dark side views the light. Which is which? Or do we all live in a world of blackness?

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Is this one new? I don't remember it .. I know it is one of your best.. so much emotion,, the hatred for society .. one that falls short so many times. Loved it, Phillip.

Chloe
xoxo

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 28, 2008

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In the professional space, I am almost a diety... I say that with the greatest of humility. In my personal life I am frail and a primitive man... Self-actualization is not all it's cracked up to be. .. more..

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