Mature

Weighing who I am,
Thorns twinging my lost spirit,
Stop this utter pain,
Naive acts are now ribald,
Flourish in maturity.

Author's Note

I wrote this because I am aggravated with myself and needed to get my feelings out in a short, meaningful poem.

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Short & to the point with this read...a bit more focus in the lines than the other I read of yours...yet you give us your thoughts in a relatively small amount of time...in 5 lines...

[Eddie Phillips]

The best way for a writer to work through frustration and anger is to write. It is our gift and talent. You said a lot in very few words. The use of the word ribald is extraordinary because it gives poem deeper meaning.

[Pixals]

Yeah, I believe you're right :) Writing helps alot. It leaves me feeling satisfied and relieved.

[HLDXyQ3uGx]

It's good. You may have used a limited number of words but I can really feel your aggravation, and your desire to push yourself forward.

[Pixals]

Yes, my vocabulary isn't nearly as wide as I'd like it to be.. I'm gonna work on that soon though I promise :)

[HLDXyQ3uGx]

That's great! You'd definitely be a really great writer. :)

[Pixals]

Wow thanks :) That means alot to me.

[HLDXyQ3uGx]

You're welcome :)