Marked

Time has its ways

Like a dot in heaven

Marking all that is

Liable to a word

An emotive sea

Pardoning the starts

Waving through a year

Laying the soul 

A place to be

Attuning the notes

Forgetful pleads

Desires steady through

Beyond a now

A spin on axis

Spoken in tone

The glowing night

As lips whisper

A face left seen

Until the lights

Go out

Made to purity

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think we do see better in the dark...Oedipus did once he blinded himself with the brooch.
Because the real vision is what is inside our heads and our hearts.
j.

[B]

So beautiful
Thanks Jacob

[Jibey]

A striking and thoughtful idea... illuminating many facets of life... nicely displayed in a series of brief glimpses... with an intriguing finale.

[B]

Thank you jibey