Twilight Real

It came about somewhere 

A run through drop

It was so alive so true

Fragile moment of show

Somewhere only found in dreams

Everything that streams

The forgiving voice of the night

Touching tunes of soul

Maybe fingers would shiver tonight

As those eyes stand in silence

A voice surreal

Blue ray stars

Staring into a dark veil of being

Pleading for figure

Worries runaway free

Flooding lights of a rainbow

As simple as could be

Glacial twilights

Moments of brokeness

The Wandering Why

Reviews

[Jeyanthi]

It just like sun coming up and waking up... giving reasons to tonight dreams... entangling hopeful in lost voice...

[barleygirl]

Your choice of artwork, plus you being from Iceland, immediately put me on notice: "TWILIGHT" is a very different (more expansive than how I picture it, here in the mid-latitudes) experience for this writer! Your writing, filled with powerful imagery, fulfilled my expectations & more. I love the touch of the surreal & how this is more about suspended possibilities than an actual sunset. This is very powerful, moving poetry! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Paul Bell]

Dreams have this habit of taking you so far then leaving you wanting.
But there must be messages in them as well.
Just wish I could fathom them out.

[B]

Thanks Paul

[jacob erin-cilberto]

if dreams could actually come true...Worries might run away...and leave us after the rains of trepidation, with a rainbow of mending those moments of brokenness....

j.

[B]

Right on
Thank you Jacob