The wishing Well

Drops of heaven

May fall

A heart of soul

Time would pass

Tranquil moment

Of you

Listening to a soul

Whispering time

Felt at once

Like one

A wish rains

Through veins

You are

To be undone

In Ribbons pink

Luck be a star

Tonight in dark

Crimson tones

Love is our tide

Of all that is

Being

That chance

Without

A Longing dawn

This elixir

Drowned by a well

Reviews

[Kay Salisu Titilola]

I mind was trapped in the reading of this piece as it slowly dragged me down its beautiful lines. So interesting to read and enjoyable.

It's lovely and really well penned.

[B]

Thank you Kay

[wordman]

the well of wisdom and love,,loved it

[B]

Thank you Wordman

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Pete]

ahh, one well that i would not be afraid to drink from anytime. you can't possibly go wrong. speaks directly to the soul and quenches any thirst. amazing all the things love can do ... :)

[B]

Thank you Pete

[Chris Shaw]

I felt a heightened state of connection here in these lines. Peace and tranquility. abounds. Read your poem twice to grasp the full effect of the tenderness and loving between two.Nicely penned.

Chris

[B]

Thank you Chris