Falling for the Moon

She sits on a silver horizon

Breaking an ocean from sky

Touching a ray in endless kisses

Revisiting a course of a sun

Knowing that time in tranquil blue

It too shall pass

Unraven in hindering glow

Long after a night show

Caring for all that is unseen

Peeking into a realm of green

She stands by looking through

Restlessly watching a benevolent sign

Pairing a twin of this soul

Tracking star timid shadow

The moment a glisten of curtain fall

A throne of golden bliss 

Some move in tandem hold

Throwing in a dependent tale

Falling for this moon

Riddles of words would dwindle

As fond hearts collide

A pitch unsought of the night

Seeking true 

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

The silver lining of a tender love taken too soon to a distant star...
resting beside you every night as heaven covers the atmosphere with
lullabies... a moonlit dream where memories sleep. truly, Pat

[B]

You are very observant
You caught my intentions behind the words here
Fabulous
Thanks

[Sami Khalil]

Beautiful conveyance, nice imagery and colourful wording.

[B]

Thank you Sami

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think this is Mother Earth.using her moon's light..looking out at us, and for us...watching hearts collide, always providing the beautiful background for love...
nicely done,
j.

[B]

Always giving
Thank you Jacob

[Chris Shaw]

A visual and reflective poem..
'knowing that time in tranquil blue
it too shall pass'
Searching for that special soul.

Nicely conveyed lines Lingering Soul.

Chris

[B]

Thanks dear Chris

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome:)

[Chris Shaw]

Always good to come back for a second read. Beautiful poem.

Chris

[B]

sweet - thank you

[Einstein Noodle]

i think your opening lines are strong ...really like the way the moon "breaks" the sky line mmmmmmmmmmmm in sparkly silver and blues ... and kisses rays ... i read it as the animal .. and see them serenely gliding in fluid bliss from those kisses .. or could be the connection ol' moon has with Sol ;) L4 using "a course" and "a sun" is very loose and open .. one might imagine many other worlds .. i want it to read "the course" and "the sun" so my feeling is grounded a bit .. in this very abstract lovers' mysticism .. the pairing of souls personifying the sun and moon so beautiful says i! in L16 do you mean throne instead of "thrown"? love the tandem hold .. i would fall for that moon any time ...i think your closing is also powerful ..riddles and questions abate as we do find and fall in true love ... i read several times and each time became more absorbed in your poem ..lovely title ..inspiring pic ..and a romantic deeply reflective poem says i! all flow well together ..
E.

[B]

Thank you E
I will do a tiny little edit lol

[Einstein Noodle]

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