Luminous

A touch beyond land

A Goddess of love

Fascinated by a start

Passing through another glance

Empty handed yet alone

Something quivers well known

A moonlight serenity 

Kissing fate by the hand

Loud in silence

Sharing this instant heart

True the colors of living

Seeing all that is sought

Unforgettable movements

Shades of you

Announced further away

A song would do the undone

Certain in its own way

Surely forever a ray

Warm till noon

A day in cascades

Field of innocent snow

Rendering a thought gone astray 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it's almost impossible sometimes to capture the right words to describe a person...we almost touch those words, those thoughts...but maybe she is just too ethereal to capture in a poem...she is wanting to run wild and free...that is why "a song would do the undone" and cause the poet's poem to be "undone."
j.

[B]

Thank you Jacob you see things quite clearly

[Chris Shaw]

Beautiful thoughts which made my own mind wander as I read your lines. Made me think of a free spirit. All good wishes.

Chris

[barleygirl]

I love your word-crafting with graceful imagery that imparts sensations more than thoughts. I notice that there are sensory shifts from cool to warm & from longing to fulfilled as the poem goes along. Reminds me of sitting in a spot where nature caresses me, thinking about someone who's gentle on my mind (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[B]

Thank you Barley