There is a lovely, swift flow to this poem, even more brisk than your usual style.....
"Alone in a world, guilty of love". Those words speak volumes of a sweet suffering. One should never be guilty of love. It should be found, embraced and then one shall never be alone.
She still lingers and she still writes. Another lovely poem.
Posted 5 Years Ago
5 Years Ago
Thanks doodley
I am still warming up into my own style
Thanks
it is really tough when we love and are not loved back...we wonder if we have done something wrong not to have that love reciprocated...and wonder why we have been put into solitary confinement.
j.
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
I love your take on this one
Maybe this soul sits in solitary confinement at will through lov.. read moreI love your take on this one
Maybe this soul sits in solitary confinement at will through love
Thanks for your review