Sentimental Bold

Unlike the seamless mirage her reflection

Sea shades of royalty would spur inside

Piercing eyes forgone a transparent search

Passionate seconds through rose like words

Enchanting stares through star black

Echoes of the run foam a heated shore

Whispering shots beat shadows of elixir

Aurora hides in her glaring scene

Housing colors of deep red shimmer

Dressing cascades of his call

Beholding a note of all that is 

As hope appears through landing fate

Green groves of lands swim afar

For sight would never gather 

Opaque widowed deep berries 

As lips touch the edge of desire 

Petal curves to a sentimental fold

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved this poem. I felt the longing and the wonder in the words. You made the reader feel the thoughts and the places. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[B]

Thanks C :)

[Einstein Noodle]

mmmmmmmmm deep and dark and mysterious ..and then that incredible closing line .. stunning visuals .. really like the forces in "Echoes of the run foam a heated shore" ...it inspires an instant scene for me ...
E.

[B]

Thanks E ................

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[MsJewel]

You have painted some wonderful images for the reader to enjoy. I love the soft flow of your words as well. A pleasure to read :) Julie

[B]

Thanks Julie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love the last line so much...a very nature oriented write combining with sensuality to the nth degree.
j.

[B]

Thank you Jacob

[H.L. Cerveise]

Love the picture you have picked for this writing. I enjoyed the flow and the images it painted in my mind's eye. The line "As lips touch the edge of desire" touched my heart very much.

Well done!

[B]

Thank you HL

[John the Baptist]

The imagery in this one is both beautiful and imaginative. However, I am having some trouble establishing continuity within the couplets. Sometimes the second line seems to proceed logically from the first, but at other times it doesn't. Of course, perhaps that was the poet's intent.

[B]

Thanks John
I guess its my style of writing